March 18th, 2008

Fashion Girls

The Great Plot Synopsis Project

As many of you have probably already read, Joshua Palmatier (our own [info]jpsorrow) has herded a large number of author-cats, asking each of us to post a synopsis from a book that has been published. I was pleased to be asked to participate -- one of the questions that comes up most often on the various author loops I frequent is "how do you write a synopsis?" (along with variations, such as "how many pages is too many pages?") I find the discussion endlessly interesting, mostly because it exemplifies our need for more words in the English language: We all use "synopsis" to mean so many different things.

In any case, check out the authors below, for their Plot Synopsis posts on March 18. And if you've enjoyed the fruits of this project, swing by the LiveJournal of [info]jpsorrow, and let him know! (My synopsis post will follow this one.)



Plot Synopsis Project participant links:

Patricia Bray (pbray): http://www.sff.net/people/patriciabray/synopsis.html


Chaz Brenchley (desperance): http://desperance.livejournal.com


Mike Brotherton: http://www.mikebrotherton.com


Tobias Buckell: http://www.tobiasbuckell.com/2008/02/01/ask-me-a-question-was-crystal-rain-sold-as-part-of-a-series/


S.C. Butler (scbutler): http://scbutler.livejournal.com


Barbara Campbell: www.barbara-campbell.com/inside.htm


David B. Coe (davidbcoe): http://davidbcoe.livejournal.com


Jennifer Dunne (jennifer_dunne): http://jennifer_dunne.livejournal.com


S.L. Farrell (sleigh): http://sleigh.livejournal.com


Diana Francis (difrancis): http://difrancis.livejournal.com


Gregory Frost (frostokovich): http://frostokovich.livejournal.com


Felix Gilman: http://www.felixgilman.com/wordpress/


Jim C. Hines (jimhines): http://jimhines.livejournal.com


Jackie Kessler (jackiekessler): http://www.jackiekessler.com/blog


Mindy Klasky (mindyklasky): http://mindyklasky.livejournal.com


Misty Massey (madkestrel): http://madkestrel.livejournal.com


C.E. Murphy (mizkit): http://mizkit.livejournal.com


Naomi Novik (naominovik): http://naominovik.livejournal.com


Joshua Palmatier (jpsorrow): http://jpsorrow.livejournal.com


Maria V. Snyder: http://blog.myspace.com/mariavsnyder


Jennifer Stevenson (smokingpigeon): http://smokingpigeon.livejournal.com


Michelle West (msagara): http://msagara.livejournal.com


Sean Williams (ladnews): http://ladnews.livejournal.com


There’s also a book available that has other samples of plot synopses in it. It’s called I Have This Nifty Idea: Now What Do I Do With It? [Amazon; Mysterious Galaxy], edited by Mike Resnick. Check it out for more samples!
Fashion Girls

Synopsis: SORCERY AND THE SINGLE GIRL

When [info]jpsorrow asked me to participate in the Great Plot Synopsis Project, my first thought was, "Great!  I'll use GIRL'S GUIDE TO WITCHCRAFT" because it's been out for long enough that I won't spoil anyone's reading of the book.

Then, the project was clarified, and I understood that we were supposed to post full synopses, not "back of the book" hooks that we'd used to sell our novels.  Well, GIRL'S GUIDE never *got* a synopsis treatment - it went from "back of the book" to novel, without a synopsis in between.  You can read the "back of the book" copy, which secured my contract for GIRL'S GUIDE TO WITCHCRAFT, SORCERY AND THE SINGLE GIRL, and MAGIC AND THE MODERN GIRL here:  http://www.mindyklasky.com/details_witchcraft.html (the six short paragraphs under "What's it all about")

Nope.  I needed to give you all a full synopsis. 

And so I will:  The full synopsis for SORCERY AND THE SINGLE GIRL.

Here's the synopsis that I submitted to my editor (synopsis-submission was a payment point under this contract; these 1.5 pages earned me one third of my advance on the novel): 

 


Those of you who have read the completed novel will note that there are several substantial storylines missing entirely from this synopsis:


Each of those storylines evolved as I was writing the novel, giving greater depth to the overall work.  Of course, there were other changes as well - "Parker" became "Graeme" (after a query on this blog, for a British-sounding name), I abandoned the start date of Valentine's Day (so that the timeline worked out for a set end date), etc.

I hope that you find this synopsis helpful.  I'm happy to answer questions in the comments.  Let's all assume that anyone reading the comments has read the book (or doesn't care if the book is spoiled, plot-wise.)

Mindy, interested to see what other authors are posting for their synopses!